Convergence Journalism weekly blog 3

    Hi everyone this is James, and I'm about to give my feedback on an article I found online. I will put a link to the article in this post. http://www.cnn.com/2017/09/20/americas/hurricane-maria-caribbean-islands/index.html

   I  thought the reporter formatted the headline well, the language hat was used gets your attention. It also gives a brief summary of some information you need to know. The lead paragraph  has information  you need to know and it also answers who was affected and where this happened. I thought the body paragraph was structured well, it supports the lead paragraph and gives you a few quotes.


I do however, think the ending was somewhat abrupt, and the lead para graph is mostly made up of quotes. Also, it doesn't really answer how many people were affected by the hurricane.  Another thing I noticed was the fact that the article does not give a very god explanation of how this could affect people who are reeding the article.

 I will make sure I explain how the stories I write affect people who reed them. I will also check to . be certain that I . answer the . who, what, when, where, why, and how questions. Also I'll check to . see if the ending sounds abrupt.

I collaborated this week with my class to help get the assembly set up. I also have been working with some one in my class to learn how to use some of the equipment.