Convergence journalism weekly blog 2

Hi every one this is James. I'm about to give you my feedback about a news story. I found that has effected a lot of people already. http://money.cnn.com/2017/09/08/technology/equifax-hack-qa/index.html?iid=EL

Some things the reporter did well were the fact that the head line was written  well not every word was capitalized and it also gives a brief summary about what happened. Another thing the reporter did well was the fact that they listed who, what, where and, when questions and answers, along with the fact that the lead paragraph gets your attention as it should.

Some things I think the reporter could have done better are the fact that this article was relatively short and I wasn't sure about the list format of this article. However, it dit make it easier to find some of my information. Also, the article did not have very much content.


I will use what I have learned from .his article by making sure I have enough content, along with putting my information where it should be located. I will also configure my articles so that they will not appear like a massive list. I will . also make sure to get all of my information on the article.