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Tuesday, November 21, 2017

Convergence weekly blog 10

Hi every one this is James. Sorry about the delay, I will resume posting next week and my next post will be on time. Well time for my review here's the link http://www.cnn.com/2017/11/20/world/first-interstellar-object-solar-system/index.html

I thought the headline was structured well and it was able to get my attention.  I also thought the opening paragraph did a good job summarizing the article. I also think the reporter did a good job explaining what was found.

some things I thought the reporter could have done better were that fact that the article doesn't really specify how it was determined that this object is not from our solar system. also the article doesn't really specify how astronomers  are preparing to find more objects like this.

I will take sure I get all of the information I need for my articles.  Also,  I will make sure to. get a plan. for the future in the articles I write.



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