Hi every one this is James well time for my weekly blog I have put the link to the article I found in this post. http://www.cnn.com/2017/10/10/us/california-wildfire-by-the-numbers/index.html
Well I think the reporter did a good job writing the article in a way that keeps your attention. I also like how the reporter used statics to give us the information we need. I also think the headline does a good job giving you a quick summary of the article.
I do however, think the reporter could have gotten some quotes from people who were affected but don't get me wrong wild fire is extremely dangerous. Also, while I do think a bullet list format was a good idea for this type of article I do think the ending seemed a bit rushed as a result of this.
I will make sure my articles In the future do not feel rushed at the end and I will make sure to get both sides of the story. I have collaborated in class to help get ONW Now set up recently as well as get a new computer connected to the teleprompters.
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